Frantically, the wavy terrain starts to go splash splash with the baby blue sky. The frigid North pole was turning him into a block of ice. The clouds look like smashed smooth MARSHMALLOWS!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for reading.
Hi Dreah. Wow! I like the descriptive words you have used; frigid, wavy terrain, smashed smooth. I also like how you used an -ly starter to begin your writing. Next time, could you try and add the challenge sentence into your writing :-)
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ReplyDeleteHi Dreah. Wow! I like the descriptive words you have used; frigid, wavy terrain, smashed smooth. I also like how you used an -ly starter to begin your writing. Next time, could you try and add the challenge sentence into your writing :-)
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